Title: Pippa The Special Plastic Bag
Pippa was a plastic bag. She was no ordinary plastic bag. She was a pink plastic bag! She drifted through the ocean. Pippa came across a creature. It was green with a big hard shell. The creature opened its mouth and swam towards her. GOBBLE! GOBBLE! GOBBLE! The creature swallowed her whole. It was that moment that Pippa realised that she was in the creature’s throat! BLEEW! She got spat out. SHE WAS FREE!
Pippa drifted towards the beach for a nice sunbathe. A little girl picked her up. “That’s not where you should be?” said the girl. The little girl dropped her in disgust. “EWWW IT HAS DIRT ON IT” yelled the little girl as she threw Pippa onto a turtle. The little girl stomped away with a grumpy face.
The turtle’s name was Tina. Pippa and Tina became the best of friends. THE END written by Malaya Dayo
Tina the turtle and the wrong type of jellyfish
Crunch Tina was gobbling up some jellyfish as she drifted through the big ocean. Then Tina spotted a shiny pink Jellyfish well that’s what she thought…
Tina opened her big turtle mouth and swam up to the jellyfish and GOBBLE! GOBBLE! GOBBLE! She tried to swallow the creature cough cough Tina was choking!
BLEEW She just managed to spit out the jellyfish then realised it wasn’t a jellyfish she had mistaken a plastic bag!
On the side of the bag Tina saw a name written on the side called Pippa. Tina swam up to shore and saw a little girl taking Pippa with her. The little girl was calling Pippa disgusting!. Tina had a rest on the sand then went back off into the water with Pippa the plastic bag they became very close friends THE END. written by Niah Nicholas
Hi I’m Esther from St Francis of Assisi Catholic school. I really liked the way you put two sides on the story There was Tina’s side and Pippa’s side It’s a lovely story. You taught me to love the ocean and know that everything has life even the smallest flowers. Next time you could write Tina’s Side or Pippa’s Side, Otherwise It’s an amazing story with an amazing ending .
Have you ever gone to the beach before? I have it was fun! – Esther N.